When a teen must fear for his life
just walking to the store, something is wrong in society. We applaud ourselves
as being an innovated and superior society when we cannot fix problems we have
been facing for centuries. What a slave faced many years ago, is still in play
today as people still discriminate others whether it be based on sexuality,
race, and even age. We may think we have solved the problems long ago when discrimination
still plays a role in society and it is not right. Discrimination is still
alive and well in our society.
When innocent people must fear for
their lives just because of their skin color no one can make the argument that discrimination
is not in our society. Because over time it has become more apparent and I will
not pretend it does not exist. White supremacy has been dominating our society from
when people first sailed the ocean blue. But now in the smart age filled with personal
and technological advancements, this superiority over others should have been fixed,
correct? Well no. Just last week a police car pulled over a college student for
speeding. This student happened to be white giving him time to explain his
situation and in the end having the police officer help him tie his tie. Now
this may seem like a generous action but when just this summer a black father
was shot in his parked car when asked to reach for his license and registration,
it shows the true underlying fear and discrimination still being input in
society. The white student had probably been asked for his license and
registration just the same as the black father. However, his life was not taken
just because he was white. These are problems we thought we overcame but
because of misunderstanding and trepidation we are just back where we started.
Discrimination not only takes form
in race but can be seen in many forms including gender. When the 19th
amendment was passed, women had believed their struggle and fight to be equal
to men had been completed. Well once again society has proved that being the
gender you are is also not good enough to be equal to the white male. One example
of this is the “pink tax”. When buying products there always seems to be
something for women. These products are ultimately the same as the regular one
however with a little color scheme change the prices seem to increase rapidly. I’m
sure that pink dye doesn’t not cost a whole two dollars more but since it is for
a female the princes are ranked up. It seems as females are an inconvenience to
society and we must make up for it by paying more for a floral scented
toothpaste. Discrimination should still not be affecting the way we are
treated.
Discrimination happens every day and
to almost everyone at some point in time. I remember one time me and a group of
friends had planned to sneak some snacks into a movie theater. We headed to the
nearest convenient store which happened to be empty and were all swarming through
aisles conversing and just looking for the tastiest of the choices. There was
only one worker and around eight of us teens so I understood his worries. However,
when he made us all leave the shop making accusations of us stealing and how we
weren’t going to pay I as confused. We weren’t bad people and of course were
going to pay however his thoughts and fears for the worst made him jump to
conclusions causing us to not give him our business. I think that discrimination
is fueled by anticipation of the unknown and worries based on doubts. However,
no matter how unsure someone is that does not give them the right to discriminate
against someone.
Fear and misunderstandings are key
when discussing discrimination. We expect the worst out of situations as revert
to stereotypical thoughts giving others an unfair advantage. When we should be
trying to empathies and treat everyone equal. Equality is what was strived for and
thought we achieved centuries ago. But for our society to have no changed
anything is pathetic. We have the ability and the drive to create change and
truly create equality for everyone together.
Carina, your essay was so powerful and well said. I loved your use of rhetorical questions when trying to make a point. This really intrigued me to keep on reading and captured my attention. I also loved your current issues and personal examples. I was able to see the points you were making about discrimination existing to this today in various forms. One thing you can work on is using more advanced vocabulary in certain places and proofreading for very minor grammatical mistakes. Other than that you did a lovely job Carina!
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Carina, a black and Hispanic teenager residing in Brooklyn, New York
ReplyDeleteOccasion: n/a
Audience: general public
Purpose: to inform on discrimination's consistent presence in society
Subject: discrimination's relevance
Tone: critical tone; final paragraph, "But for our society to not have changed is pathetic."